I'm going to add all of my poems for you to read if you want to. Please don't be offended by any of the writings or language.

First:

Pity the Dark

Blackened blood is all i have to offer you now.
My cancer invades your body with your heart in tow.
Pity me for pity's sake
For self-pity is all your heart makes.
You darken the doorway in my nightmares
While your hollow eyes absorb the fear that scares
Little girls from turning unique,
Little girls from reaching their peak.
Little boys kiss the girls and make them cry,
"More, we want more before you die!"
We clones will use their sex
And bring them down to great effect.
Dark girls only cry, cut, stutter.
Dark boys have nought but hate to utter.

U no

I'm glad i refrained.
I'm glad i restrained
Myself from calling you in my deepest, darkest hour.
For all the moments of pleasure our passion always turns sour.
Twisted words from twisted tongues
Once tied in knots now tied in thought.
Best to let it alone to die.
Best not to risk a try.
For falling is too much to take
When we're just repeating break, break, break.
Best to leave it alone to die.
Best not to risk a try.

Mummy Mush

It is hard to gauge a life
In steps, in dates, in feet
I've gauged your life
In hugs, in smiles, in treats

From my mouth
Tender words of comfort
In my blood
Thunderous roars distort

Insomnia
Watching you breathe
I never sleep
There's no more need

I've fallen for that look of wonder
The fascination in your eyes
I watch lights dancing
So young, so intelligent, so wise

To see you grow
Is joy and elation
To see you progress
Is fear and trepidation

All of me will always be you
I promise to see you through
All of you will always be me
Caitlin I love you.

Mirror

Evil deeds sow evil seeds
That, when darkness comes, he comes to reap.
So multiply while your chance is there
And speak your false oaths in his lair.

It's uncontroversial to remain underneath.
Cowardice is the legacy that you bequeath.
What lies behind you is now your future.
Your good judgement and cautiousness will be your torture.

Choose to watch the sheep go by
Or follow them, deceit and lies.
Freedom, free body, free speech, free mind.
Multiples of one of a kind.

Be quiet now, don't think too loud.
Retreat beneath his utilitarian shroud.
Dumb down, its safer for you that way
But you give up your chance to ever say.

Look at your image in your stylised mirror
Try closing that window and opening a new door
There are those who commit evil and those who allow it
Don't let them belong, don't let them fit.

Dot Dot Dot

Don't stress yourself young man
I promise to be gentle when I take you in hand
The price of experience is often too much
You have it right there, but you're too scared to touch.

Your opinion of you should be much higher
You make me all hot and my palms perspire
When I look at you my body quivers
My skin tingles and my spine's racked with shivers.

I'd like to kiss your dot dot dot
And be the reason you're all hot.
I would like to lick your bleep
And cuddle after and go to sleep.

Stix and Stoans

You skanky wh*re, you make me hurl.
You think you're such a clever girl.
You're not worth the sh*t stains under my foot.
If I'd had more sense I'd have given you the boot.

We all make mistakes sometimes.
Time to start owning up to yours and stop using mine.
Your lies once pierced me, not any more
Now they're like a bulldozer at the door.

You know I'm more intelligent than you
But up til now 'more clever' wasn't true.
But now I've learned a valuable lesson
From now on its not my patience you'll be testing.

Pick on some other sucker to be your doll.
Maybe they'll help to break your fall
Oh no, I'm sorry, my mistake
I forgot there was nothing left to take.

Comfort Sex

Stick it in me quick you punk.
Hurry now while I'm still drunk.
Cos you're getting uglier by the minute.
And soon I'll not let you anywhere near it.
Your dick is small and you're kind of short.
You really aren't at all my sort.
Come on I want some satisfaction.
Before I kick you out pre-dawn.
I don't want the neighbours seeing.
The way I forget about how I'm feeling.
Conceal my actions, why should they know.
About my sex when I'm feeling low.
Come the f*ck on, this is getting boring.
I got to moan before the girl left this morning.
That's more like it, boy come on.
Touch me there and it'll turn me on.
Yeah that's right you've got it now.
Oh that's different, ooh…hmm… ow!
20 minutes later, ok leave, bye bye.
Oh what's the matter, you gonna cry?
Brownie points for making me moan and shout.
Now f*ck off, go on, GET OUT!

Love's Observations

I'm thankful for small mercies, like the beauty in your eyes.
I'm grateful for the right to feel the warmth of your thighs.
I love to watch you cross the room, your muscles tense with each step.
I like the smudged mascara look when i know you haven't slept.
I wonder often at your movements as encapturing as they are.
And the sense of beauteous release each time you touch my heart.
I love it when you come to me to hold you in the night.
I like it when we're still together at the breaking of daylight.
A million nights we've sat together and counted all the stars.
And not one of them is as full of light as i believe you are.

Illicit Still?

"Hi, how are you? I wasn't expecting this."
I see a question hover on you lips.
"Come on in, we can watch TV,
Your girlfriend let you off your leash?"
"Ha…eh yeah, I'm free tonight.
At least…while I'm out of her sight."
"I'll put a film on, TV's crap."
Then I sit with a duvet in my lap.
Someway in, the film gets heated.
You move closer from where you're seated.
You jokingly pull on the corner of my blanket.
Then I notice you're now sitting under it.
Mere inches away, just sitting there.
Although I don't mind, I think your girlfriend would care.
With no help from the cover we start warming.
In my head, images flash as a warning.
I know what's happening; you're going to touch me.
Abruptly I realise my hand is on your knee.
You're turning to face me; I'm turning to you,
My breathing is shallow, I know what to do.
My left hand reaches up to your face,
While it's the seam of your trousers my right fingers trace.
An intake of breath, a sharp gasp,
As our lips meet in a frenzied clash.
My body reaches for you as your hands find me.
You pull me closer, onto your knee.
I'm naked so quickly it takes me by surprise,
But without my clothes the heat continues to rise.
I'm moving back/forth, up/down to your rhythm.
As you slip your hands down my chest I succumb.
I arch my back not resisting the feeling.
Blood flows to my head and leaves me reeling.
I'm confused as the noise becomes too much,
But I know it's just me responding to your touch.
The end is near, I feel it coming,
And my whole body is writhing and moaning.
I crumple shivering against your body.
You pull up the cover and just hold me.
Our naked embrace lit by TV and waning moon,
And I realise you will be leaving soon.
I start to breathe better as I rest my head on your shoulder.
Is it too much to ask for the night not to get older?

Sex Is All About The Maths

Instantly excited at your name's illumination.
A longing surfaces from deep pools of unfamiliarity and distance.
A sunset flash and suddenly there is connection.
I grip to your words of the mundane with heated meanings.
Bathed in the pale blue light of infinite joinings.
Staring at you through veiled space, hoping for mirrored reaction.
Images of our statistics come to mind and i see us for what we are.
The most divine equations, with hellish definitions.
The has come to catch me out of symmetry.
Make me a whole, create the sum of my completion.
As i reach there i will come apart and lead you then to 0,
And as you are in and of your prime, you'll revel in desertion.

I liked the 'mirror' and 'town' one. They were powerful 

Thank you. It's always nice to get some feedback. My partner is a writer but gets embarrassed when reading my poetry and can't give me any meaningful comments.

You're amazing. :] Your poems got me all stirred up.